WORST. WRITING. EVER.

[luchia]

http://www.livejournal.com/community/fanficrants/1508562.html?#cutid1

WORST. EROTICA. EVER. I mean... *winces* "flail"? "rattle"? These are NOT good adjectives for the situation. And it just gets worse, too! LIKE ZORRO? WTF?!

I gave myself whiplash I was laughing so hard at this. THAT, my friend, is funny.